How To Roleplay

Hai! This is Dappledheart here, and I'm going to teach you how to RP. Otherwise known as How to Roleplay.

Here is a BAD Example:

Firestar darted through the trees and killed a mouse.

                     SEE WUT I MEAN PEOPLE?! It's missing details!

Here is a FIXED version:

Firestar darted through the trees. The smell of mouse was nearby. Finally, he spotted the tiny creature. Keeping low, he stalked until he was a tail-length away. Then, he pounced and nipped the mouse's spine.

PLEASE DO NOT POWERPLAY!

Bad Example: Dappledheart bit Brackenfur's tail, causing him to fall.

Fixed Example: Dappledheart attempted to bite Brackenfur's tail, hoping to make him fall.

I'm Locking and stickying!

Willowfeather:Also no godmodding ex.Willowfeather fought of every single warrior that challenged her killing them all before they could touch her.

Otherwise know as being a LIONBLAZE. You are NOT Lionblazes.Thank you.